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My True Identity- Chapter 1

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My True Identity

Chapter 1- Dilemma

It was a beautiful sunny morning in the quiet village of Konoha. The sunlight streamed through every window of every building, waking the sleeping villagers. One of those villagers was a 16 year old young man with golden blond hair, sapphire blue eyes, and whisker marks on his cheeks.

As the sun shined through his bedroom window, he slowly opened his eyes. He lazily sat up to stretch and yawn then got up to get dressed.
After, he ran outside and headed to Ichiraku Ramen, his favorite place to eat. On the way, he saw a girl with soft lavender eyes and long midnight colored hair walking down the street.

"Mornin' Hinata!" Naruto yelled as he approached the dark haired girl.

"Good morning Naruto-kun," she said sweetly.

"What are you doing out so early?" he asked curiously.

"Nothing, I was just taking a morning walk for some fresh air," she said with a smile.

"Well then, wanna get some ramen with me?" he asked.

"S-sure," she replied blushing a bit.

"Ok then, let's go. I'm starving," he said, putting his hand over his growling stomach.

Hinata giggled then nodded and together they walked to Ichiraku.
Naruto and Hinata have grown to be really good friends. They talk all the time and they hang out a lot.

It all started when Hinata went out for a stroll in the village one day. As she turned a corner she saw Naruto walking down the street with a sad depressed look on his face.
Later that day, she went out to run an errand for her father and she spotted him sitting on a tall concrete pillar with his head down. She wondered what was wrong.
That night, she couldn't sleep so she went out for a midnight stroll around the quiet village. She walked on this road that overlooked the village. Then she stopped when she saw Naruto sitting on a bench under a lit lamp post with a melting Popsicle in his hand and tears streaming down his face. She was really worried about him and wanted to know what was wrong. So she tried her best to gather courage and then she slowly walked toward him.

"N-Naruto-kun," she said with a worried expression.

"Hinata?" Naruto said as he wiped away his tears. "What are you doing here?"

"I was just taking a walk. Then I saw you looking r-really sad. What's wrong?" she asked sitting down beside me.

He stared at the ground in silence.

'I hope I didn't upset him,' Hinata thought as she looked away.

"Ero-sennin…," he began.

Hinata snapped out of her thoughts and turned to face him.

"Ero-sennin… is dead." He said still staring at the ground.

"W-What?!!" Hinata said in her quiet voice.

"He was killed by Pein… the leader of Akatsuki," he said.

Hinata stayed quiet, shocked by the news. Then she looked at him and said "I-I'm so sorry, Naruto-kun."

"He taught me so much. He helped me to get stronger… and now he's gone," he said as his eyes welled up with tears. "I wanted… him to keep watching me. I wanted him to see me become Hokage."

There was a moment of silence.

"Naruto-kun…," Hinata began. "Jiraya-sama will always be watching you."

Naruto lifted his head and faced Hinata a bit surprised.

Hinata smiled. "Even at this moment, he's watching you from somewhere. He wouldn't want be happy to see you so sad. So be the same as always. Don't get too depressed."
Naruto looked down in silence.

'Oh no! I think I made it worse!' she thought as she looked down also.

Suddenly, Naruto quickly leaned towards Hinata, who was caught by surprise, and hugged her tightly. He stayed quiet a moment then smiled and said "Thank you… Hinata."

Hinata had a surprised expression on her face, but suddenly it vanished and was replaced with a sweet smile. Then she gently wrapped her arms around him and quietly said "You're welcome… Naruto-kun."

The next day, Naruto walked out of Ichiraku Ramen and caught sight of a familiar brunette with lavender eyes. He smiled and ran towards her.

"Hey Hinata," he said as he approached her.

"H-Hello Naruto-kun," she said with a smile.

"Um… Thank you so much for last night," he said. "It was nice talking to you."

"Y-You're welcome Naruto-kun," she said blushing a bit.

"Well, uh…," he began. "I was wondering if you'd like to sit and talk for awhile. I-If you want to." He blushed a bit.

"S-Sure, I-I'd love to," she said blushing a bit more.

"Great," he said with a smile.

Hinata giggled.

Ever since that day, Naruto and Hinata have grown to be good friends. They take walks together and talk. They confide in each other and hang out all the time.

"That was some good ramen," Hinata said as she walked out of Ichiraku's.

"As always," Naruto said as he followed behind her.
Hinata giggled but agreed.

"Hey wanna go for a walk Hinata?" he asked.

"Sure," she said, blushing a little.

"Ok then, let's go," he said.

Hinata nodded and followed beside him.

They walked around the village and talked about all kinds of things. They joked and laughed and they had a good time. As they walked around, the villagers turned and looked at Naruto with those hateful eyes and quietly whispered amongst themselves. Although they were quiet, Naruto could hear every word they said and he stopped in his tracks. He lowered his head and clenched his fists as the whispers in his head grew louder and louder. Hinata stopped and turned to see Naruto trembling with clenched fists. She looked around and saw the villagers staring at Naruto with hateful expressions spread across their faces. She turned to Naruto and began to worry as he continued trembling.

"N-Naruto-kun," she said as she lifted her hand and slowly moved it toward him.

Hearing his name, Naruto quickly snapped out of his trance.

"What?" he said confusingly.

"A-Are you alright?" she asked worried.

"Y-Yeah," he said trying to keep her from worrying. "Let's go somewhere quieter," he said grabbing her hand and pulling her.

"O-Ok," she said a bit confused.

He took her to a place that had a large lake and was surrounded by trees. They walked down to the end of the pier and sat down.

"A-Are you sure you're ok?" Hinata asked a bit worried.

"Yeah, I'm fine. Why?" Naruto asked curiously.

"Well it's just… in the village… I saw the way the villagers stared at you," she said with a serious expression.

"You did?" he said quietly as he looked at his reflection in the water.

"Yeah. I –I don't know why they always look at you like that. I wish I knew why," she said lowering her head.

Naruto turned and saw Hinata looking sad and depressed.

'Should I tell her the truth…,' Naruto thought as he turned to look at his reflection again, 'About me? About the Kyuubi? She's my friend. She deserves to know. But how will she react? What will happen after? Will we still be friends? Maybe it would be best not to tell her.' He turned to look at Hinata again. 'But it hurts me to keep something like this from her.'

"N-Naruto-kun," Hinata said looking at him.

"Huh?" Naruto said, snapping out of his thoughts.

"Is something wrong?" Hinata asked.

"No, nothing's wrong. I just got a lot of things on my mind, that's all," he said.

"Oh, ok," she said a bit relieved. Then she turned and looked out at the lake.

There was a moment of silence.

"I better go now," Hinata said standing up. "Otou-san wants me to run some errands for him."

"Ok," Naruto said with a small smile.

"See you tomorrow," she said. Then she gave a little wave and started walking away.

"Hinata!" he called before she went any further.

She stopped and turned to face him.

"Uh, meet me here at sunset. There's something important I want to talk to you about," he said.

"O-Ok," she said blushing a bit. Then she ran off.
Naruto watched as she ran off then he looked down and stared at his reflection
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or any of the characters in this story. Naruto belongs to Masashi Kisimoto :)
This is a little story i made up. As you can tell by reading it, I´m not good at writting, but i thought i would upload this anyway and see what you thought. Please leave a comment. I hope you enjoy :)
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Oooh! I wanna know what happens! :D